I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teachers is Mr Wiseman.
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Tuesday, March 8, 2011
Capture the Flag
Dodging and sidestepping, we dived to get the trophy. Scurrying like a rat, we distracted the other team to claim our prize. We had won capture the flag
Fantastic writing Lee! I like how you've used words like dodging and sidestepping to start your writing. I've never played "Capture the Flag" before and you've drawn a great picture to go with your story. Keep up the wonderful work.
Fantastic writing Lee! I like how you've used words like dodging and sidestepping to start your writing. I've never played "Capture the Flag" before and you've drawn a great picture to go with your story. Keep up the wonderful work.
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Nice writing.reminds me when I use to play that.I wish that i could play that again.
ReplyDeletecool man Nice writing again and keep up the superb work