The lunch ball ring YA!! SOCCER I raced to the field. I was the first one there I saw my team. I went to get the ball off Mr Harris. We got the goals set up and our captains and pit the team.
We got started to run, I ran with the ball then I fell over it a big puddle. But I still got up the poisson and almost got the goal but our differences stopped them. The differences kicked the ball all the way to me.
I got the goal then suddenly the bell rang. Some of us fell over when we were walking. I grabbed the post and put it in Mr Harris room.
Well done Lee I am happy to see you have three paragraphs each about one main idea. You do need to correct some spelling please.
ReplyDeletepicked, possession, defenders
Also peoples names should have capital letters.