Thursday, November 1, 2012

haunted house

One halloween night there were some trick or treaters going to people house and getting some candy.  They went to a lot of places and got and got some lollies. Some of the older people were scaring them but at the end getting some candy.

They stumbled into a very big house they walked up to the house. He called here the some thing was in the in the bush. He run faster he was very scared he finally made it to the steranes it made a squeaking noise he was terrified.

He press the doorbell all of a sadin the door opened and then the carpet looked like it was going to eat. him. Then it all went quiet then  carpet wrapped around him. And smacked him into the wall and shut the door he was very hurt  but he got back up.

He got back up and started going places to find a way out he found some dynamite found some matches. He he put the bomb in the toilet  he ran and duked the bomb blooded BOOM MMMM the bomb went off. When he got up he saw that the house was gone.


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  2. Well done Lee. That was a very interesting piece of writing. I think that you could of re-read it a little bit, and do some proof reading. Other then that I really liked your post.

    Keep up the great work, Love from Chante

  3. Hi lee I like what you wrote it is long you are a artist you should make a art shop love from sister NIKKI!!!<3 <3 <3 <3 :)

  4. Hi lee its me christian i like our blog post but it needs a fix up because it dosent realy make sences