Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Kawau Island

these are thing that we can do at Kawau Island
Excellent for children of all ages. Also a Burma rope through the ferns.
Winding through the bush with a variety of stations.I am looking for is the food because I would like to try thing that I have never tried before

Monday, November 11, 2013


Once upon a time there was a vampire that roamed upon the town. At night time he scares everyone in their dreams. Some people were so scared they wet their beds. They never wanted to go.

One day he tried to scare an old man but instead of hurting him he did nothing, his dreams were too strong. He tried and tried but he could not get into his mind.  He was going to give up but he still did not.

He thought that he would not be able to scare anyone ever again. So he went back to his house and tried to find a way to get back into people's dreams. He found a way to make  it back into people he will use a teleporter to get into their  minds.

He made it in but that was just the beginning of the journey he got into it easy.  Now he had to think of bad dreams and it worked. He thought  to himself,  “I am so smart”. Next minute he died because he had no more drama so he died of shock.

Thursday, November 7, 2013


Docking Day

Auntie Mollie opened up the curtains of me and Mikey. It was an early morning. There were stars with a half moon still in the sky from last night. I made sure we were packed because it was Docking Day. “Why do we have to cut off their tales”?, I asked Uncle. “It keeps them clean and keeps flies laying eggs”, he replied. So we packed our, picnic food-(basket), a sack.
Louder and Louder the sheep came rushing in their yards. Lost lambs, worried mothers looking for each other. We yelled at the slow ones at the back to hurry up! “Last year our aunties baked us pies, bread,cake”, we said resting under a tree. “We’ll when we are done with our day we will get some deserts”, they promised us.  

Lee Paragraph Rubric

Monday, November 4, 2013

Writing Test

Planning: voice Faaiua frame Iisa

Start Writing Here:

Just when the bird's started to sing there graceful songs. The old fama stormed through a swop like paddock he noticed that his flock had disappear he thought to himself something fishy is going on  and I am going to get to the bottom of this. That made him furious steam started to come out of his ear’s and his face went red.

Then he heard a whisper F.M F.M F.M how is saying that F.M F.M F.M what does that stand for faaiua                he kept saying it. And he follow the nose then he heard the noise coming from the barn he creeped closer and closer then he knew that he was in the barn some wear. Then blood came from the roof what is this blood AHHHHHH.

He went to get the man but all he see where all his sheep they were hypnotised then faaiua jamped out behind the hay bale. Iisa say ‘aha found you’. what is wrong with you you are sick in the head. “why”. Because you hypnotised then eat them why are you doing this I dont now I am just crazy.

That is it I am calling the cop he got the cop hello there is a crazy man at my house in the distin he could he sirens ha ha they are coming for you there they are here now Faaiua shouted you will never get me alive then. I call back up I repeat I need back up then faaiua was on the chase a helicopter started to chase him then out of nowhere a steve pushed Faaiua over and then handcuffed him and got life in prison And then they lived happily ever after.

                                                                  The End.

Friday, November 1, 2013

Show Don't Tell

Just before the sun rose over the the big oak wood tree’s there were some friend that loved to go to theme parks. It was on the outside of the border of the U.S.A. there names were Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee. Lee was the least scared Eric the the most likely the scream like a girl one day they went to the world scariest theme park in the world. Nobody ever completed it because it is so scary even the name is horrifying candy land. Lee shouted “I am not scared at all”.