Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Kawau Island

these are thing that we can do at Kawau Island
Excellent for children of all ages. Also a Burma rope through the ferns.
Winding through the bush with a variety of stations.I am looking for is the food because I would like to try thing that I have never tried before

Monday, November 11, 2013


Once upon a time there was a vampire that roamed upon the town. At night time he scares everyone in their dreams. Some people were so scared they wet their beds. They never wanted to go.

One day he tried to scare an old man but instead of hurting him he did nothing, his dreams were too strong. He tried and tried but he could not get into his mind.  He was going to give up but he still did not.

He thought that he would not be able to scare anyone ever again. So he went back to his house and tried to find a way to get back into people's dreams. He found a way to make  it back into people he will use a teleporter to get into their  minds.

He made it in but that was just the beginning of the journey he got into it easy.  Now he had to think of bad dreams and it worked. He thought  to himself,  “I am so smart”. Next minute he died because he had no more drama so he died of shock.

Thursday, November 7, 2013


Docking Day

Auntie Mollie opened up the curtains of me and Mikey. It was an early morning. There were stars with a half moon still in the sky from last night. I made sure we were packed because it was Docking Day. “Why do we have to cut off their tales”?, I asked Uncle. “It keeps them clean and keeps flies laying eggs”, he replied. So we packed our, picnic food-(basket), a sack.
Louder and Louder the sheep came rushing in their yards. Lost lambs, worried mothers looking for each other. We yelled at the slow ones at the back to hurry up! “Last year our aunties baked us pies, bread,cake”, we said resting under a tree. “We’ll when we are done with our day we will get some deserts”, they promised us.  

Lee Paragraph Rubric

Monday, November 4, 2013

Writing Test

Planning: voice Faaiua frame Iisa

Start Writing Here:

Just when the bird's started to sing there graceful songs. The old fama stormed through a swop like paddock he noticed that his flock had disappear he thought to himself something fishy is going on  and I am going to get to the bottom of this. That made him furious steam started to come out of his ear’s and his face went red.

Then he heard a whisper F.M F.M F.M how is saying that F.M F.M F.M what does that stand for faaiua                he kept saying it. And he follow the nose then he heard the noise coming from the barn he creeped closer and closer then he knew that he was in the barn some wear. Then blood came from the roof what is this blood AHHHHHH.

He went to get the man but all he see where all his sheep they were hypnotised then faaiua jamped out behind the hay bale. Iisa say ‘aha found you’. what is wrong with you you are sick in the head. “why”. Because you hypnotised then eat them why are you doing this I dont now I am just crazy.

That is it I am calling the cop he got the cop hello there is a crazy man at my house in the distin he could he sirens ha ha they are coming for you there they are here now Faaiua shouted you will never get me alive then. I call back up I repeat I need back up then faaiua was on the chase a helicopter started to chase him then out of nowhere a steve pushed Faaiua over and then handcuffed him and got life in prison And then they lived happily ever after.

                                                                  The End.

Friday, November 1, 2013

Show Don't Tell

Just before the sun rose over the the big oak wood tree’s there were some friend that loved to go to theme parks. It was on the outside of the border of the U.S.A. there names were Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee. Lee was the least scared Eric the the most likely the scream like a girl one day they went to the world scariest theme park in the world. Nobody ever completed it because it is so scary even the name is horrifying candy land. Lee shouted “I am not scared at all”.

Tuesday, October 29, 2013


Just before the sun shin’s over the the big oak wood tree’s there were  some friend that loved to go to theme parks. There names were Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee. Lee was the least scared Eric the the most likely the scream like a girl one day they went to the world scariest theme park in the world. Nobody ever completed it because it is so scary evening the name is horrifying candy land. Lee shout “I am not scared at all”.

Eric replied back “dry you will cry like a little girl”  “no you will” “no you will” “no you will” “no you will” “no you will” They were trash talking for a long time they put a $5 bet to see who will scream first Faaiua gazed at the line “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!” 2 hour later. We are  there then they ran to the front of the coaster then it began to shake they we up the first hill what would happen?

Then the rail began to crack ahhhhhhhh lee was screaming like a little girl you have to give me $5 dollis. but what good is it when we are going to die. They tried to make it go faster but the cracks were following them going over hill’s it was so terrifying then crack went faster and faster the crack’s broke the rail the was in front of the then they thought that they were going to die.

Then they shouted is it a bird is it a plane to ist is superman. Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee
Superman floe as fast as he could just before they landed on the ground and picked it up with all his power and lifted them back on to the rail yaaaaaa!!!! super man said “My job here is done” and flew we are the first people to ever complete the roller coaster and then walked into the sunset  and they live happily ever after. THE END

Friday, October 18, 2013

A Foal Is Born

One lovely day there was a boy name Ryan. Ryan’s mum had a horse named Del. Ryan watched Del for two weeks and saw Del grow bigger and bigger. 6 Hours later Ryan said “It’ll be born any hours now.” The next day Ryan woke up and he saw his mum at the horse paddock. When he went outside he saw a little foal lying on the grass near Del.

Ryan ran from me Ryan asked his mum if he could pat the foal. “No!” Shouted mum, “It is too soon.” He knelt beside the foal he put his finger in her ear and mouth the foal was half covered with something that  look like a big plastic bag she shaking her head as if she was trying to get it off that sac protected her when she was inside her mother’s womb. Ryan watched the foal stand up with it’s long wobbly legs. while Ryan was at school Ryan mum fed the Foal.

now it is time to measure the height in the end mum had to hold her. The next day the vet came and checked dosti and del. next the vet got out the stethoscope and losing to her heart beat then she took a blood sample to check if she was getting enough antibodies from del’s milk antibodies are special substances in the blood.

Monday, October 14, 2013

laser tag

In the holidays I went to my little nephew’s birthday he was turning six and we got to play laser tag it was the first time I ever got to play it. It was so fun but before the fun could begin we had to watch a video of how to use it. It told us where our points where what our name was my name was captain and how to change your guns then we got suited up then the door opened it look so cool it glowing.

We hid then a voice said game on then we ran me and my sister were hiding but it was no fair we had six year old’s. But then my big sister Penny was playing then I started to get a lot of points “YESSSSSSS” after a long time the game ended I look at my points I won I got 9,000 I had a lot of fun with my family. 

Monday, August 26, 2013


Never in my life had I thought that I’d end up here. On an island with my friend Lee. I remember the night before. The plane that I was on sunk into the ocean. Me and Lee escaped with our lives. But we’ve never been stranded before, except when it came to Minecraft, so our survival skills weren’t that weak.

We knew that at night there were these things that would come and go for the kill. After all, there was this cave with zombies in it.

We got started straight away. There was only one tree there, so I had to make the most of the opportunity. After 20 painful tree cutting hours, I finally got the wood. I made some wooden planks, to use later on.

Since there was only one tree, our house had to be made of dirt, as there were tons of it. It went well, until we got to the roof. The dirt kept falling down, so I went to got some clay. Lee used some of the planks to make a pickaxe.

Lee came back with enough cobblestone to make a furnace. I came back with lots of clay. But we had a problem. We hadn’t got anything to burn the clay, except for the wood.

I ran outside, looking for any more trees. None. When it seemed like we’d never use the precious wood again, I saw a sapling. If I planted it, then it’d grow into another tree. I saw another sapling.

There were 3 of them, so that meant that we would have 3x the wood. After planting them, I ran to Lee and told him the news. So we cooked the clay, and came out with bricks. We finished the roof by 5:30 p.m. The sun was going down.

Lee decided to make some beds, so he went out to the sheep, and started to tear off their wool. I used some sand to make glass. Now, we could watch the sun set, and we could know when it was safe to go outside.

I used the remaining wooden planks(6 of them), to make a door. Lee came back. “Hey uh..” He exclaimed, “The sheep ran away. I’ve only got enough wool for one bed.”
“Damn! Who’s gonna stay up and guard the house!?”
“What do you mean? You said that if there were enough, then we’d both sleep.”
“I mean that we’d go to sleep with swords in our hands.”

Lee jumped into the bed.
“I’m sleepy. You guard the house.”
I glared angrily at Lee. But Lee was in the bed, so I had no choice but to protect the house. I walked out, and looked at the cave. I was trembling. Was this a good idea? Then, I heard a stomp. It got louder. And louder. And louder. And lou--. It turned out to be a cow. I did a facepalm. Scared of a cow? Crazy.

But then a zombie ran out.
“EEP!” I screamed in horror. I threw the sword right at the zombie. It fell on the ground. As I picked up the sword, all the zombies ran out at me. I ran up a hill. The zombies had cornered me.

The sun came up just in time. For some reason, the zombies hated the sun. Maybe they were vampires. Then, a slow zombie got set on fire. It was squealing, but I didn’t want to help it. After all, it tried to kill me.The zombie died right in front of the cave.

“Suffer.” I said.
I walked back to the house. Lee was busy making a pumpkin pie. “I found a pumpkin, egg, and some sugar cane.
“Cool! Can I have some I asked.
“What do you mean, sorry?”
“You don’t deserve it.” At that moment I went angry.
“Whoa dude calm down,”
“Oh, no-one.”
“Look man I’m sorry!”
“Okay, the pie’s your’s.”
“AWWW YEAH!” I gobbled the pie up. It was delicious. After breakfast, I took Lee the the cave.
“Pretty freaky, eh?” I asked Lee. He agreed. Should we walk in? Or should we not? That was the new question. I walked in. I had plenty of torches, and the sword that I used. It wasn’t that scary, the cave. In fact, I even found some iron! But as I was getting the goods, A zombie ran at me.

I searched for my sword, and I saw a zombie pick it up.
“WHY DID I THROW MY SWORD LIKE THAT WHEN THE IRON CAME!??!” I screamed. When it seemed like I’d get slain, Lee came for me. He shot an arrow at the zombies. That made them even angrier, but they were further away.
“Dude, c’mon! Run out the cave!” Lee yelled.

For some reason, I knew that trouble was still to come. I was right. The sun had gone down when we were in the cave, so when we came out the zombies kept following.
“So,” I asked. “Any bright idea’s?”
“Nope. Not one.”
“I’ve got one.”
“RUN!” We ran so fast that it made Usain Bolt look like a rock. But the zombies didn’t give up up. They ran at the door, trying to break it.
“Any other bright idea’s?” Lee asked.
“Either die hiding, or live mining.”
“Let’s mine!”
“Agreed!” And we went all the way down. Then, we hit a cave. There were zombies. Now, me and Lee were stuck. Zombies everywhere. Nowhere to go.
So what did we do? We had nothing. The zombies ran at us. I was almost paralyzed with fear.

“What now?” Lee asked desperately. I looked down. Of course! We had to dig straight down. I told Lee, and he immediately went down. I followed. The zombies did as well, but by then the fall was too great for anything to survive.
“YAY!” Lee cried.
“We did it!” We were overjoyed. I hugged Lee in relief. Then, something caught my eye. Gold.

“Lee, look behind you!”
“I thought there weren’t any zombies...GOLD!! Let’s get it!”
“What’s wrong?”
“Our pickaxes aren’t strong enough.” We both looked at our pickaxes. A tear ran down Lee’s cheek.
“C’mon,”Lee said sadly, “let’s go.

I felt sad for Lee. Going through all that trouble just to find out that we couldn’t get gold. Then, I remembered something. When we in the cave, I got iron. We could use it to make an iron pickaxe, and get the goods.

I told Lee, and the his pupils went from brown to green money signs.
“Are you alright?” I asked. Lee didn’t answer. He just ran to the gold area.
“I’m gonna be rich!!” Lee yelled. I did a facepalm. We didn’t even make the iron pickaxe yet.

“WAIT A MINUTE!!” Lee screamed.
“This is a pickaxe of stone! You lied to me!”
“We haven’t even MADE the pickaxe yet. Stop whining.” Lee climbed up, and when he got to the stairs, I called to Lee. He turned around. A zombie had a sword and it ran at Lee. He took out the stone pickaxe, and used it to fight. Lee was the better fighter, and it seemed like he’d win. He did. The zombie ran away.

Lee came back inside, but the he ran at me. My eyes followed him. Then, SHUNK! The zombie Lee fought went round to stab me, but Lee sacrificed himself. But because of that, I was in so much trouble.

A zombie with a sword ready to kill. My only help had sacrificed himself, leaving me alone. Defenceless.
“Lee’s lucky that he’s in the afterlife!” I muttered.
The zombie walked closer to me. I didn’t know what to do. Then I looked at the furnace. Then the chest. Maybe I could shove the zombie in the furnace and hide in the chest. No. That wouldn’t work. The zombie had a sword.

Then I looked at the crafting table. The iron pickaxe! It was lying there when the zombie came to stab me. I picked it up, and then it was like one of those action movie sword-fighting scenes. Except I had a pickaxe.

Luckily for me, the zombie had my wooden sword, and soon enough the sword broke. The zombie looked like it was begging for mercy. I felt no mercy at all. I took the zombie to the furnace, and shoved it in.

“You kill my friend,” I said angrily, “I take your life.”

When the next day rolled around, I was slowly walking around the island. I don’t think I could last another night. Then, I heard a boat. My head spun around to the approaching boat.

It was getting closer. And closer. Then, I saw 2 people. My friend Vaifoa. We first met on Minecraft, and now I see him come to my rescue. I took a breath of relief. Time to go home.

But then something bad happened. A stupid squid came mindlessly up and broke the boat. I ran to save my friend. When I got him out of the water, I told him of what happened recently.

He was shocked. I turned back to Vaifoa. The squid was on in head. I helped take it off. But then the island shook.
“What was that!?” Vaifoa asked.
“Probably that active volcano.”
“WHAT!? You never told me!”
“Well hey! I only noticed the volcano now!”
“What! You never noticed a massive volcano which your house is right next to!?” The island rumbled again.

Me and Vaifoa decided to fix the boat. We spent day and night working on it. And by the next day it was almost done, when disaster struck. The volcano erupted. We tested the boat, but it needed power. Where could we get power? From the lava.

The lava got closer.

And closer.

And closer.

Tuesday, August 20, 2013

The Wolf On Sheep's Clothing

The Wolf In Sheeps Clothing

Title:The Wolf In The Sheeps Clothing


Characters (names, personalities, strengths, weaknesses): The Wolf,The Farmer and the sheep
The wolf is skinny,The farmer is fat and the sheep is fat
Setting (Where is the story set. Describe the place in detail): The forest, the house and the farm

What was the problem?
The Wolf was hungry, so he decided to dress up in the sheeps wool.
What was the solution?
The farmer picked the thinnest sheep
What was the Moral of the Story?
To never pretend to be something else
My favourite part of the story was?
My favourite part is when the wolf gets eaten

Illustrate your favourite scene in the story.
Read the below story then answer the following questions with full sentences. Remember to change the colour of your answers then post this onto your blog.

Bananas and Pineapples
Bananas are a yellow fruit that grows in hot climates. Sometimes it is called the “perfect fruit” because you don’t have to wash it and it is easy to carry. Bananas are good for muscles. For a delicious treat, add some banana slices to other foods, like cereal, ice cream, or a peanut butter sandwich. A banana is also an excellent breakfast food.
Pineapples are another example of a yellow fruit that grows in hot climates. Pineapples are very juicy and sweet. They taste wonderful when added to other foods, like pizza, ice cream, or cakes. Pineapples are not very easy to carry around because they are large and have prickly skin. Since you don't eat the outer skin of a pineapple, you don’t have to wash it before you eat it.

1. According to the paragraphs above, how are bananas and pineapples alike?
B.They are both warm. D. They both taste good
a. They are both dirty. b. They are both warm.

c. They are both easy to carry. d. They both taste good with ice cream.

2. How are bananas and pineapples different?

a. Pineapples are easy to carry and bananas are not.
b. Bananas are easy to carry and pineapples are not.
c. Pineapples have ice cream in them and bananas do not.
d. Bananas and pineapples grow in hot climates.

3. Why don't you have to wash a pineapple before you eat it?
_Because you dont eat the outer skin____________________________________________________
Because its called a perfect fruit______________________________________________________

4. Which statement is an opinion?
c. Pineapples have prickly skin.
a. Pineapples taste wonderful when they are added to other foods.
b. Bananas are a yellow fruit that grows in hot climates.
c. Pineapples have prickly skin.
d. Bananas are sometimes called the “perfect fruit.”

Two Great Vacation Ideas
The Beach
Going to the beach is a lot of fun. At the ocean, you can see colorful fish and different kinds of birds. If the weather is warm enough, you can even go for a swim. Most beaches have lots of space to run, play, build sand castles, fly kites, and have a picnic. When you run on the sand, be careful that a jellyfish doesn’t sting you!
The Mountains
Visiting the mountains is very exciting. You can see beautiful, tall trees and many different kinds of green plants. If you watch carefully and quietly, you might even see a deer, a squirrel, and or a snake. If you feel strong, you might go for a long hike on a trail or even climb to a mountaintop. There is plenty of space to play Frisbee, eat lunch outdoors, or play hide-and-go-seek. At night, you can build a bonfire. Be careful of the mosquitoes!

1. According to these two paragraphs, how are the mountains and the beach the same?
a. Both places are great for flying kites.
b. Both places are great for swimming.
c. Both places are great for hiking.
d. Both places are great for eating outdoors.

2. According to these two paragraphs, how are the mountains and the beach different?
a. There is plenty of room to play at both places.
b. The beach has different animals than the mountains.
c. The beach is hot and the mountains are very cold.
d. The beach is a safer place to visit than the mountains.

3. According to the first paragraph, why should you be careful if you run on a sandy beach?
That a jellyfish sting you