Friday, November 1, 2013

Show Don't Tell

Just before the sun rose over the the big oak wood tree’s there were some friend that loved to go to theme parks. It was on the outside of the border of the U.S.A. there names were Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee. Lee was the least scared Eric the the most likely the scream like a girl one day they went to the world scariest theme park in the world. Nobody ever completed it because it is so scary even the name is horrifying candy land. Lee shouted “I am not scared at all”.

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