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Wednesday, February 15, 2012

lee kiwifruit


The short hairs tickled my tongue. When we got to eat the kiwifruit I said to myself “this is very sweet". I didn't want to eat the skin because it was prickly and dry.


When I squashed it it was squishy. The outside was pale green with a white center. There were heaps of little seeds which looked like ants.

2 comments:

  1. Good work there lee

    I like that story it can be hard but well done
    making that story. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Hi Lee, that was a very good and descriptive way of showing detail in your writing! Keep up the great work!!!

    Chante

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