Writing Test

Planning: voice Faaiua frame Iisa

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Just when the bird's started to sing there graceful songs. The old fama stormed through a swop like paddock he noticed that his flock had disappear he thought to himself something fishy is going on  and I am going to get to the bottom of this. That made him furious steam started to come out of his ear’s and his face went red.

Then he heard a whisper F.M F.M F.M how is saying that F.M F.M F.M what does that stand for faaiua                he kept saying it. And he follow the nose then he heard the noise coming from the barn he creeped closer and closer then he knew that he was in the barn some wear. Then blood came from the roof what is this blood AHHHHHH.

He went to get the man but all he see where all his sheep they were hypnotised then faaiua jamped out behind the hay bale. Iisa say ‘aha found you’. what is wrong with you you are sick in the head. “why”. Because you hypnotised then eat them why are you doing this I dont now I am just crazy.

That is it I am calling the cop he got the cop hello there is a crazy man at my house in the distin he could he sirens ha ha they are coming for you there they are here now Faaiua shouted you will never get me alive then. I call back up I repeat I need back up then faaiua was on the chase a helicopter started to chase him then out of nowhere a steve pushed Faaiua over and then handcuffed him and got life in prison And then they lived happily ever after.

                                                                  The End.

Show Don't Tell

Just before the sun rose over the the big oak wood tree’s there were some friend that loved to go to theme parks. It was on the outside of the border of the U.S.A. there names were Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee. Lee was the least scared Eric the the most likely the scream like a girl one day they went to the world scariest theme park in the world. Nobody ever completed it because it is so scary even the name is horrifying candy land. Lee shouted “I am not scared at all”.

Test

Just before the sun shin’s over the the big oak wood tree’s there were  some friend that loved to go to theme parks. There names were Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee. Lee was the least scared Eric the the most likely the scream like a girl one day they went to the world scariest theme park in the world. Nobody ever completed it because it is so scary evening the name is horrifying candy land. Lee shout “I am not scared at all”.

Eric replied back “dry you will cry like a little girl”  “no you will” “no you will” “no you will” “no you will” “no you will” They were trash talking for a long time they put a $5 bet to see who will scream first Faaiua gazed at the line “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!” 2 hour later. We are  there then they ran to the front of the coaster then it began to shake they we up the first hill what would happen?

Then the rail began to crack ahhhhhhhh lee was screaming like a little girl you have to give me $5 dollis. but what good is it when we are going to die. They tried to make it go faster but the cracks were following them going over hill’s it was so terrifying then crack went faster and faster the crack’s broke the rail the was in front of the then they thought that they were going to die.

Then they shouted is it a bird is it a plane to ist is superman. Iisa, Faaiua, Vaifoa, Eric and Lee

Superman floe as fast as he could just before they landed on the ground and picked it up with all his power and lifted them back on to the rail yaaaaaa!!!! super man said “My job here is done” and flew we are the first people to ever complete the roller coaster and then walked into the sunset  and they live happily ever after. THE END

A Foal Is Born

One lovely day there was a boy name Ryan. Ryan’s mum had a horse named Del. Ryan watched Del for two weeks and saw Del grow bigger and bigger. 6 Hours later Ryan said “It’ll be born any hours now.” The next day Ryan woke up and he saw his mum at the horse paddock. When he went outside he saw a little foal lying on the grass near Del.

Ryan ran from me Ryan asked his mum if he could pat the foal. “No!” Shouted mum, “It is too soon.” He knelt beside the foal he put his finger in her ear and mouth the foal was half covered with something that  look like a big plastic bag she shaking her head as if she was trying to get it off that sac protected her when she was inside her mother’s womb. Ryan watched the foal stand up with it’s long wobbly legs. while Ryan was at school Ryan mum fed the Foal.

now it is time to measure the height in the end mum had to hold her. The next day the vet came and checked dosti and del. next the vet got out the stethoscope and losing to her heart beat then she took a blood sample to check if she was getting enough antibodies from del’s milk antibodies are special substances in the blood.

Matching

laser tag

In the holidays I went to my little nephew’s birthday he was turning six and we got to play laser tag it was the first time I ever got to play it. It was so fun but before the fun could begin we had to watch a video of how to use it. It told us where our points where what our name was my name was captain and how to change your guns then we got suited up then the door opened it look so cool it glowing.

We hid then a voice said game on then we ran me and my sister were hiding but it was no fair we had six year old’s. But then my big sister Penny was playing then I started to get a lot of points “YESSSSSSS” after a long time the game ended I look at my points I won I got 9,000 I had a lot of fun with my family. 

Three Little pig's